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Post by arrucard on Mar 16, 2008 15:31:34 GMT -5
put all your happy merry cheerful dark scary harrowing poems up here they can be ones that you have made or ones that you have found on the internet and that you like. ;D and no inappropriate poems please I dont want this thread deleted  |
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Post by arrucard on Mar 16, 2008 15:38:45 GMT -5
Here is a poem I have written
*AHEM*
The first day I met her, I had instantly fallen in love. You were as beautiful as a Rose my darling Ayanna.
We said we will meet again but you never returned.
As I came to your bed, I could not bear it for your memory had been lost the memories I had most cherished.
As I held your hand, that very last day,I felt your pulse slowly slipping away.
My beautiful flower has wilted. Its beauty is of no more.
As I watch your casket lower to the ground my heart had dug its own grave.
But in my dreams, you have never left me. There is not one day I do not think about you.
-John
Dawson (Me)
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Post by John on Mar 16, 2008 15:48:05 GMT -5
thats nice, kind of depressing, but nice, oh, and i like how you cleared your throat at the beginning, nice touch
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Post by arrucard on Mar 16, 2008 15:49:53 GMT -5
thanks I try to make things that I do some what dark Edgar Allan Poe is my Fav poet /writer
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Post by Lan on Mar 16, 2008 15:51:58 GMT -5
o.O hey just stopping by to check out the thread..nice!
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Post by John on Mar 16, 2008 15:52:37 GMT -5
what a coincidence, Edgar Allen Poe is my favorite poet as well
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Post by arrucard on Mar 16, 2008 15:53:39 GMT -5
thanks remeber you guys can post up your own poems and stuff its okay it does not always have to be yours if you dont wright poetry  |
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Post by Lan on Mar 16, 2008 15:53:52 GMT -5
he scares me.....NEVERMORE
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Post by Lan on Mar 16, 2008 15:54:30 GMT -5
oh and arrucard that poem made me depressed lol
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Post by arrucard on Mar 16, 2008 15:55:10 GMT -5
sorry it suppossed to
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Post by Lan on Mar 16, 2008 15:56:30 GMT -5
hey a limerik is 5 syllables, 7, then 5 right?
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Post by arrucard on Mar 16, 2008 15:57:14 GMT -5
you meen a haiku?
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Post by John on Mar 16, 2008 15:57:21 GMT -5
hmm...maybe, but i know thats Haiku, but limmeriks might be the same
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Post by Lan on Mar 16, 2008 15:57:40 GMT -5
hrm i will now attempt a haiku
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Post by Lan on Mar 16, 2008 15:59:54 GMT -5
if you insult me
you will wake up in cuba
alone and afraid
~Clark Bilbrey (me)
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