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Post by anasa on Jun 29, 2008 20:22:30 GMT -5
Is it? Huh. I didn't know that. I suppose you're just going to have to read the whole thing, then. Too bad.  |
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Post by Lan on Jun 29, 2008 20:25:16 GMT -5
Groan. It's hard for me, I'm a speed reader.
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Post by Lan on Jun 29, 2008 20:36:10 GMT -5
Ok, I read it. I still dont get it o.O, it's good writing, it's just a bit complex.
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Post by anasa on Jun 29, 2008 20:42:10 GMT -5
Yeah, I was afraid that people wouldn't get it. Hopefully, once I'm done writing it, you can just skip to each time that the princess says "We've completed a chapter!" and read it like a normal story.  |
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Post by Lan on Jun 29, 2008 21:44:18 GMT -5
I'm not saying that it's a bad story, it's good, but it doesn't really flow, you have to pay close attention to what is happening, and it kind of is confusing with going from one character to another. It's really good writing though  |
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Post by anasa on Jun 29, 2008 22:06:17 GMT -5
I'm not taking offense, Lan, I'm just giving a suggestion. I want you to be able to enjoy the story because you're my friend. *anime eyes*
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Post by arrucard on Jun 30, 2008 10:45:44 GMT -5
O.o;
aaawwwwkkkkwaaaaaard....
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Post by Lan on Jun 30, 2008 11:31:00 GMT -5
Not really, =p
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Post by arrucard on Jun 30, 2008 11:34:30 GMT -5
lol Just trying to be funny..
and I think were kinda Spamming in her thread >.>;
maybe RCC would be better reserved for this Mr.Admin of DUME
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Post by Arissa Warrner on Jun 30, 2008 13:15:02 GMT -5
i think its cool
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Post by anasa on Jun 30, 2008 16:30:51 GMT -5
Ame. ^_^
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